Polygoned's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[DASH it!]

Oh my god...

Very good. Nicely animated and good message but...

...it scared the crap out of me when the girl with black eyes popped up with the beep...

[doom repercussions of evi]

Really now...

Like Iceleaf said, low quality graphics, shitty plot and crappy english.

However, I think this could be awesome if you executed it in a different manner.
+Add some background music to make it more dramatic
+Improve on drawings, not nessecarily animation. Could do still-pictures with subtitles to immerse the viewer
+Expand a lot on the script.. I mean, really now.. "And he became a zombie."
+Darker environments
+Creepy radio static & the likes in the background

If you'd do this and keep the "you are the demon" moment you'd get one hell of a flash with an awesome mindfuck at the end.

QuickDude responds:

Once again I did not write this, I only animated/voiced it.