Oh my god...
Very good. Nicely animated and good message but...
...it scared the crap out of me when the girl with black eyes popped up with the beep...
Like Iceleaf said, low quality graphics, shitty plot and crappy english.
However, I think this could be awesome if you executed it in a different manner.
+Add some background music to make it more dramatic
+Improve on drawings, not nessecarily animation. Could do still-pictures with subtitles to immerse the viewer
+Expand a lot on the script.. I mean, really now.. "And he became a zombie."
+Creepy radio static & the likes in the background
If you'd do this and keep the "you are the demon" moment you'd get one hell of a flash with an awesome mindfuck at the end.
Once again I did not write this, I only animated/voiced it.
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